Who (who is in the story)
Elena, Tere, Susan, Regina, friends
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Where( where does the story take place)
The story takes place at my ranch about 1 hour of Mexico City.
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Beginning(what happens)
we got to my ranch i feel tired. we got at 11 of the night and then my sisters wok up at 7 and the m y sisters friends got to my ranch. is the morning we swam.
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Middle (what happens)
The frend of my sister hit her noous and blood come out of it. My nanny brot some nab kings and she givet to hear to stop the blod. Then we wated a litel wiel and then we got in the pool. The wether was very sony. We ate pitzza and drank soda.
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End (what happens)
On Sunday my friends sister make her a cake and we ate it. my sister and l went on the back of the car and one friend of my sister didn't now that we were in the back and but her things on the back of the car and almost hit us in the head. We packed or stuff and we left back to Mexico city.
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